http://deviline12-1.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] deviline12-1.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] astri13 2010-12-22 11:47 am (UTC)

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Ah, I'm so impressed!! The story is short and yet you managed to make it sound romantic and cute and wonderful!! I enjoyed reading every word of it! And I loved the ending, because for some reason I ended up comparing Jared to Jack..... I think it had something with you mentioning that Jared was like a giant puppy. Great, now that image's in my head. Haha, anyway, great story!

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