Thank you so much for the great comment. Detailed feedback. Yay.

Just one little concirt: I didn't think it too convincing that - especially after two years of 'successfully' driving nearly all his friends away - it only took a few days of protective custody for Jensen to see that (at least some of his) friends still cared for him.

I totally hear yah on this. Initially, this story was supposed to be longer and more detailed but I had to drop so many things to make the deadline. Of course I have only my lousy time management to blame on this. But especially with the character evolution, I wasn't totally satisfied with how it turned out either.

Still, it's great that you enjoyed the story regardless.