I liked the title, very fitting!

Thank you. I always take forever to find a title for my stories.

I enjoyed how Jack became a character as well.

Awww, thanks. That's what I was going for.

Also, Jensen's realization that he wasn't ready to die after all seemed very believable, as was his realization that Jared could have died with him.

Wow, that's a great compliment. Nothing is worse in a story to have characters behaving in ways that make you go "buzzuh?" And not in a good way.

So thank you very, very much. Glad you enjoyed.