I think you wrote out the interpersonal relationships quite well, and the added difficulty of being unable to write visual cues when you took Jensen's POV just made clear to me what an excellent job you were doing because everyone was still them and perfect. :)

*blushes* That is such a great compliment. Thank you very, very much.

Also, you totally fooled me as to who was the mole. I had it pegged as Dushku from the beginning and then SANDY?! Woah, baby, hahahah.

Heh. I tried to strew in false mole-clues so yay for a working surprise.