Weee! That was fun! ^_^ I loved how completely opposite Jensen and Jared were. How Jared, despite how many times Jensen kept pushing him away, he wouldn't give up. I even wanted to slap Jensen around a bit. O.o Love the added suspense as well. Always my favorite in stories.
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Date: 2008-07-11 09:58 pm (UTC)Good job! Very well written. Thanks for sharing!