Well, to be honest, most grammar rules are designed for writing nonfiction. Don't even get me started on how many lab reports I wrote in Grad school had to formatted entirely in past perfect tense. Yick! But when it comes to fiction writing, there are no hard fast rules. Pick up a lot of bestsellers on the shelves today, and you'll find a load of taboo grammar. What matters is telling the story, and so long as yo don't offend anyone with horrible spelling and hundred word sentences, playing it fast and loose is tolerated to a good degree and appreciated when it supports the theme in some way.
As for your specific question. Just... past perfect tense is yucky, lol.
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Date: 2008-03-24 12:45 pm (UTC)As for your specific question. Just... past perfect tense is yucky, lol.