Excuse me while I faint from my heart thumping crazily in my chest after this wonderful ending...........X_x
I surmise my thoughts in the comment boxes attest to my ability to be incoherent towards an exciting turn of events and I'm sure I don't have to warn you that I'm adding this to my favorites where, if given the chance, I will flaunt it as a must-read for the sheer originality and fully developed characterisation of J2.
I truly liked this and it was well written, the plot forming slowly and speeding along at an exciting pace as the conflict neared. This ending feels like letting the breath out after holding it in the first place. If you ever write an epilouge I imagine it will be like a gasp.
Please, help produce carbon dioxide for plants by making people gasp. :)
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Date: 2008-04-20 09:59 am (UTC)I surmise my thoughts in the comment boxes attest to my ability to be incoherent towards an exciting turn of events and I'm sure I don't have to warn you that I'm adding this to my favorites where, if given the chance, I will flaunt it as a must-read for the sheer originality and fully developed characterisation of J2.
I truly liked this and it was well written, the plot forming slowly and speeding along at an exciting pace as the conflict neared. This ending feels like letting the breath out after holding it in the first place. If you ever write an epilouge I imagine it will be like a gasp.
Please, help produce carbon dioxide for plants by making people gasp. :)