Epilogue!!! In my head, like, at least a year later or maybe three... Jen's been wanting to try to top Jaret, but he's not ever sure if Jaret might want to.. and Jaret, of course, assumes that Jen likes always being taken care of.. (That Jaret! He needs to be taught a lesson, dude!) ..and so one day.. maybe they were sparring or maybe they stumbled or maybe Jaret was already laying down.. but somehow, Jen ends up sitting on top of him, and he starts saying something like "Now who's on top, your ass is mine!" except half-way through he gets all shy and unsure again.. until he feels a certain body part of Jaret's poking him... and it would be like, Jaret's first time being made love to..
Man, I wish there'd been more Stavus & Krisian. I know this isn't really their story, but I don't think anyone has ever put these two in such a neat setting... and people usually write Steve as gentle and nice, and here you had made him a tough hardened mercenary and then didn't give us more! :PP
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Date: 2008-02-11 11:47 am (UTC)Man, I wish there'd been more Stavus & Krisian. I know this isn't really their story, but I don't think anyone has ever put these two in such a neat setting... and people usually write Steve as gentle and nice, and here you had made him a tough hardened mercenary and then didn't give us more! :PP