lol but as we know females are often very smart, sneaky and much stronger then the so called tough guys. To tell u the truth, i hate weak charachters, when they are useless and pathetic it irritates me. A weakness of sorts is always good but now when the are a whiny bitch. You Jen is awesome he is so self sacraficing and brave. I think it is harder to be brave for others and give yourself than just being a strong brute. So kudos on the charachter development, it works perfectly. Sometimes rape is a requirement of the story, but as you point out you have one chapter and raping him now would leave a major fall out. This has been one of the best stories i have red in the fandom. Both originall and really smart. You have brought to life a time gone by and your charachterisation has been superb. Anyay great stuff cannot wait for the ending!
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Date: 2008-01-21 07:47 pm (UTC)To tell u the truth, i hate weak charachters, when they are useless and pathetic it irritates me. A weakness of sorts is always good but now when the are a whiny bitch.
You Jen is awesome he is so self sacraficing and brave. I think it is harder to be brave for others and give yourself than just being a strong brute. So kudos on the charachter development, it works perfectly.
Sometimes rape is a requirement of the story, but as you point out you have one chapter and raping him now would leave a major fall out.
This has been one of the best stories i have red in the fandom. Both originall and really smart. You have brought to life a time gone by and your charachterisation has been superb.
Anyay great stuff cannot wait for the ending!