ext_33865 ([identity profile] astri13.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] astri13 2008-01-21 02:44 am (UTC)

Please tell me Jaret just killed that guy and is there to save Jen from that hole?

My lips are sealed. :) Only hint: I don`t do sad endings. Ever. ;-)

I like how gradually you show just how much Jen got to Jaret and how much the latter actually cares after all. Nicely layered.

Yay, glad to read it worked for you. I wanted it to be as organic as possible. Thank you so much.

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