ext_16530 ([identity profile] ongiara.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] astri13 2008-01-20 11:08 pm (UTC)

Please tell me Jaret just killed that guy and is there to save Jen from that hole?
Great work on this once again, I like how gradually you show just how much Jen got to Jaret and how much the latter actually cares after all. Nicely layered. Looking forward to the final chapter :)
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