ext_18920 ([identity profile] idiot4dean.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] astri13 2008-01-20 06:34 pm (UTC)

Great chapter. Love that Jaret gave Jen a spanking for his part in the escape of the children. Hope Jaret manages to find the children and deliver them to somewhere where they'll be relatively safe. Pity he didn't let Jen know he wouldn't sell the children to the same fate that his sister had.

Without Chad in his band I'm sure Jaret could continue as leader with Jen by his side!!! I'm sure you've got something planned for them though.

Chad should never have defied Jaret and taken Jen. If he isn't dead then maybe he should be sold as a slave!!!

So the fat bald man thinks he can rape our Jen? No-one gets to do that! Jen has friends who will look out for him. So who's his mystery rescuer? Jaret? Tomin? Kristian? Or maybe Stavos?

Looking forward to more.

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