I love this story so much!!! It's got to be my favorite current WIP. Not only is it a great story, but I love all the little touches you include, like this one:

After a night of tossing and turning - that is until Jaret had put a stop to it by trapping him in a tight embrace

You could have just said, "Jen tossed and turned all night", but including that extra bit adds so much.

And you did a very fine job creating tension in the scene where Jen was trying to drug Jaret. I was feeling nervous right along with the young healer as Jaret drank so sparingly from the wine.

And yeaaa for Krisian for agreeing to help the children escape.

Couple of typos caught my eye:

"sweet fine" instead of "sweet wine"

"scooted closer to their bodies were almost touching" I think you probably wanted "till"

"pressed a gente kiss"

And now I'm going to go back and read it again!