So excited to see an update of this story! I'm usually such a JensenGirl no matter what the character, but the way you write the character of Jaret here is compelling in its complexity, and you mirror it well in Jen's feelings about/for him. In fact, many of the relationships are far from simple, with tribal loyalty conflicting wtih personal bonds and shifting back and forth. Also great job keeping up the sense of excitement and unknown. Oh, and the hotness too. LOL

Looking forward to more,
Lynsey