Yeaaa, to Jaret deciding to keep Jen, and for him making it clear that he was taking the decision out of Jen's hands, about whether Jen could join his people in slavery, or not. I also loved the line about Jaret not promising to forego seduction, as a way to bring Jen to his bed. Hee.
Heh. Well, he needed to keep a little window of opportunity open for himself. :D
You did a good job this time, too, of squashing most of those pesky typos. =)
Yay, I`m working my way up. *g* Still much thanks for finding the remaining ones.
Glad you`re still enjoying the story. Thank you so much.
Re: Brava!
Heh. Well, he needed to keep a little window of opportunity open for himself. :D
You did a good job this time, too, of squashing most of those pesky typos. =)
Yay, I`m working my way up. *g* Still much thanks for finding the remaining ones.
Glad you`re still enjoying the story. Thank you so much.