I saw the update yesterday 10 minutes before I had to leave work, I had to print it and read it in the bus, I couldn't wait until today! And now I'm back with a comment :D.
I must say that your story is the one that has me totally addicted at the moment (is that even correct in english? Anyway, I hope you understand what I want to say). I don't even understand how I can love it more and more because the level of love was pretty high since the beginning! I can assure you that your slow pace is amazing to follow, it makes me even more eager to read the rest and it really gives a depth to the story because we can see everything that's happening in the camp.
I really like Kristian and his advices ("yeah, Jen, uses your body! Eum, I wanted to say, your brain"). And I hate Chadan. I hope he won't take advantage of Jaret's bad health. And the big revelation: I had my suspicion in the previous chapters but I forgot about it so, in the end, it was a total surprise! I can't wait for the confrontation between Jen and Jaret about that.
I really really hope that you will have a lot of chapters 5a, b, c... because I'll be really sad to see the end of this story.
PS: I've friended you, if that's ok. I've seen your list of fics, I think my day is gonna be pretty unproductive... *grins*
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I must say that your story is the one that has me totally addicted at the moment (is that even correct in english? Anyway, I hope you understand what I want to say). I don't even understand how I can love it more and more because the level of love was pretty high since the beginning! I can assure you that your slow pace is amazing to follow, it makes me even more eager to read the rest and it really gives a depth to the story because we can see everything that's happening in the camp.
I really like Kristian and his advices ("yeah, Jen, uses your body! Eum, I wanted to say, your brain"). And I hate Chadan. I hope he won't take advantage of Jaret's bad health. And the big revelation: I had my suspicion in the previous chapters but I forgot about it so, in the end, it was a total surprise! I can't wait for the confrontation between Jen and Jaret about that.
I really really hope that you will have a lot of chapters 5a, b, c... because I'll be really sad to see the end of this story.
PS: I've friended you, if that's ok. I've seen your list of fics, I think my day is gonna be pretty unproductive... *grins*