Aha, Jaret was a slave too. I knew it! *bg*

I'm glad that Krisian finally got to give his explanation to Jen, and wasn't the traitor Jen had thought him to be. And I'm glad that Jen was not able to bring himself to actually contemplate the idea of killing Jaret, despite the life he leads.

A few typos:

"There is nothing to talk," he said sharply.

Needs an "about".

"Jared ingored him"

"not to be detained so easily"

Should be "detoured"

"peak outside"

Should be "peek"