ext_33865 ([identity profile] astri13.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] astri13 2007-12-07 10:20 pm (UTC)

This story is so utterly engrossing. Your writing draws me into this world, and Jen's POV and thoughts work so well in the narrative. I am fascinated by the backstory of your characters as well.

*blushes* That makes me so happy to read. I really to view everything through Jen`s eyes but of course it is a bit restricting as to how much can be revealed.

I`m just thrilled people are sticking with the story even though I still haven`t progressed to the poooorn. And it`s the third date already. :)


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