ext_33865 ([identity profile] astri13.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] astri13 2007-12-07 10:12 pm (UTC)

I love the way you're spinning this out slowly, giving the reader little glimpses of how things really are for all the characters.

This makes me so happy to read because I was fearing things were too slow-paced and as the middle part too transitional so people would get bored. Phew. Thank you muchly.

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